Zelph- shadow of an animal, unite sites and hair lip where good. Strap was okay but the flip was a bit random. Up and down verse not a lot of clowning but some good use of pic angles with the ones that hit.
Obj- hand me down, std's were okay, and target was s decent flip. I thought you did alright for a topical head. Some decent use of pics but you could've gone in a bit more. Your style is more descriptive than punch focused( naturally being a topical writer) and that is my preference In a battle. You did some alright clowning tho.
With harder hits and a a style preference I've got zelph edging this. V/zelph
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