This is very close. Objective had a unique scheme w/ good flow. GG couldve been good....I didnt like your spin on it. Pool was ok w/ cool wording. You picked up IMO at std's & kids clothes. Closer was a cool idea but missed imo. Not a bad verse for a topical head. U had flow though so props bc it read smooth.
Zelph: Had a shaky start but picked up w/ strap and animal in shadow. The 2nd pic were better altho some wording was off the hairlip coulda been flipped much better. Closer got slept on imo maybe wording? Iono. I think you had ammo for sure imo.
V -- Zelph w/ edge
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