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Old 05-14-2018, 10:57 PM   #3
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This was cool, Ex.

I like the aggression and the 'no fucks given' type of vibe this piece exuded. It really matches you're normal boarding persona. The flow was smooth for the most part except for the first couple of lines. The rest was breezy tho. The forward flip line was tight and the primary highlight here. A little lite on the overall punches though. But I suspect you're just coasting for now. Drop more often. I'll keep peeping/feeding. Stay solid, homie. Peace.
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