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Camp Bell · 01-23-2013, 12:17 PM

i liked this but i thought it dragged on to the point i wanted to stop reading.
it was ran together also, your lines. which i had to figure where they ended
but overall it was cool fam!

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...pe-How-are-you

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...e-and-Campbell

01-23-2013, 12:17 PM	#5
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	i liked this but i thought it dragged on to the point i wanted to stop reading. it was ran together also, your lines. which i had to figure where they ended but overall it was cool fam! http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...pe-How-are-you http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...e-and-Campbell __________________ get high. write rhymes.