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Old 07-25-2019, 11:21 PM   #12
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I thought candy had some dope lines. It just felt disjointed and the connecting concepts were a bit too disparate for coherence imo. Some nice visuals but you gotta tie them together a lil better.

Scar had some dope rhyme schemes and imagery. Like candy i thought the story jumped from here to there a bit savagely at parts. But it was more coherent and enjoyable imo this time around

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