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DynamiCz · 08-05-2018, 12:39 PM

Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths

Not really feeling the opener here...

You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye

Lol, funny jab here

Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly

Another funny jab..I like this one

ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it

ODing on the LIP bars, I didn't like this one to much here tho

me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat

This was good hit here and worded just right on the execution

& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad

Closer was decent, nothing to hard hitting on the opponent imo

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I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did

Wow, direct personal sting on the opener

Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse

Lol, I had some Annabelle concepts I wanted to use, this was executed nice I must say tho.

Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic

Fiya!

Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season

Lol this was decent far as a jab go, personally funny here tho

You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!

Bingo lines kinda played, lmao but that rattle as a gunbar shit/lingo setup was funny as hell I cant lie

Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’

Decent closer, I don't to much think Can lines are hard hitters, but overall the line is decent at best.

Overall this was nice battle here, Des had a cool verse, but I feel like he was ODing on the LIP jokes a little to much where Zelph was all around in his verse. Des had 2 lines in his verse far as quotes go. Zelph had three & a half line far as quotes go with less misses. Props to both, but I got Zelph on this one.

V-FB

08-05-2018, 12:39 PM	#9
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths Not really feeling the opener here... You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die. dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye Lol, funny jab here Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly Another funny jab..I like this one ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it ODing on the LIP bars, I didn't like this one to much here tho me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat This was good hit here and worded just right on the execution & now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad Closer was decent, nothing to hard hitting on the opponent imo ----------- I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did Wow, direct personal sting on the opener Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse Lol, I had some Annabelle concepts I wanted to use, this was executed nice I must say tho. Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic Fiya! Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season Lol this was decent far as a jab go, personally funny here tho You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night! Bingo lines kinda played, lmao but that rattle as a gunbar shit/lingo setup was funny as hell I cant lie Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’ Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’ Decent closer, I don't to much think Can lines are hard hitters, but overall the line is decent at best. Overall this was nice battle here, Des had a cool verse, but I feel like he was ODing on the LIP jokes a little to much where Zelph was all around in his verse. Des had 2 lines in his verse far as quotes go. Zelph had three & a half line far as quotes go with less misses. Props to both, but I got Zelph on this one. V-FB __________________ ...ThA New ErA...