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i love seeing you change, don’t want to see you the same. love being in rain. i hate leaving a trail that's exposed. i love sleet, hail and the snow. they’re the same thing just at different times of the year. like.. we are. or we were. i love to be in control. i hate underlying factors. i hate underlining tantrums.
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This was my favorite section. I didnt like the time machine part, I liked that one line about trying to delete the undo button, but the buildup to fit that in felt off compared to the rest of the piece.
keep writing