this is for bread & im winnin it all, ur a crackhead scrub faggot
if u ever grabbed a full Purse, Snatcher its a petty crime to support ya drug habit
I know I did a purse bar in a previous round and got plenty of shit for it but this is ok
try to be sneaky & rob me, the heat'll put a hole in ya eye
if this Catapult a gun on me then the cannon launchin his soul in the sky
i can't rectify trying to make pull/pult sound passable as wordplay. Maybe "'ta gun" and "the gun" works more phonetically but it's still a reach
im jus waitin for NC to ok this homi, gotta uzi i'll bang it on this clown
treat ya like fertilizer, soon as the Green Thumbs me up u'll get planted in the ground
I like the concept but the execution is off. From the context of talking about a skilled gardner, nobody says they've got a "Green Thumbs me up" the interpretation of this wordplay only works on one side
ur slut gets trained, txtin the crew to get ready & come smash it
she like a Conveyor Belt, goes down the line & handles everyones package
ok
u love ya girl but shes a whore mad dudes fucked her
that Pigment the world to u but gagin on jizz showed her true colors
dope
i treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead
every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds
I'll be honest, I'm not sure what "vit" or "vitil" is supposed to represent and the "vitil" in vitiligo isn't pronounced vital
ya team food & they pussy, talkin behind ya back on the gay tip
cuz everyone in Click Bait, press'em once an they open up sayin sum fake shit
this is dope
SIG had u leakin from his bars, spittin that rough shit u hatin
after Gangland everyone of his punches ur grill looked like a bloods initiation
solid closer, i like the overall concept
body
Ur prolly a landscaper & Barc is ur boss...but all of this has been gone over...
Ur the type of nigga to 'pull out a blade in the hood'...only to be repairin a lawnmower
this is cool but the general concept isn't super fresh
I'll catch'em sleepin! Chopper in hand. Nozzle aimed the crown he wears...
Nigga I'm gonna leave Bananas in Pyjamas BEFORE I come down the stairs!
I didn't understand wtf bananas in pyjamas was so I looked it up on youtube and after about 3 seconds of watching this intro clip, I hate you for writing this bar and making me read it. It's solid though
Idgaf if ur son breathin, let me speak so u understand. The way I scheme is loco...
I'll put ur kid underground while he's still alive until he's livin out a scene from Coco,
Again, don't really know the reference but I can understand what's going on without looking it up. That being said, it's still kind of a stale concept
Peep the plotline. AK had a Full House until I rolled up & buried the buildin...
& we all know Family Matters so I waited until Al was Married... with Children,
Nah im not a fan of just connecting various sitcoms with no solid relationship to each other
I left his whole fam in the fetal position. Body's curled...pellets from the shotty swirled...
The last thing he saw was me 'rollin thru his house w/a big toy' like the intro to Bobby's World
lol I wouldn't classify a tricycle as a toy, and I double checked the intro to bobby's world to make sure that he doesn't actually have a toy in his hand. That being said I kinda like this because of the nostalgic factor, but it could've been executed better
U've never seen a 'pistol POV' until "I Gave You Power"...I got beams & rods...
I'll drive-by ur block & put u to sleep until u have more Street Dreams than Nas,
I'm not a huge fan of associative song-title bars, but also the idea of saying I'll knock you out and you'll have street dreams is a bit of a stretch
Bum bitch! If I let this revolver pop in my grasp...u'll be shock from the blast...
Breathe easy! Or I'll put a 'snub to ur face & air out the nose' like an oxygen mask!
I really like this concept, I could nitpick it a bit but this is solid.
U aint bangin, slangin or hangin w/niggas...keep lyin & I'ma leave ur carcass bleedin...
Cuz the last cornrow u seen...was workin for a farmer during harvest season.
kinda funny, ok closer
overall this is close, I got clickbait as botb and I think AK just overall had more punches that landed for me
mvgt AK
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