Des - baby Ruth’s was cool // 2nd of beyond nay for me // fused properly lol good // one reaching and shot down was niiiice, mean // bags concept over done. Liked that you used the word beat // palates could’ve been better with a better tie in to palates...
For B. - wife’s dead fetus was harshhhhhh. Loved it // lol @ burst. Annabelle was good // dummy talk dope concept needed better set up // don’t know if I fully get the MMLP2. Not feeling even if I get it // bingo night was good for stick concepts // banging cans on floor I don’t think grocery stores honor that.
At first I had it clearly for Des but now need to re-evaluate and do it on points. Yes I got Des here. Good battle.
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Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.
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