Mr J - Nice contemplative piece here that suited the topic.
The image may invite to some serious contemplating but I see you just let loose
with the subject at hand, and at that it worked fine.
Not much to point out from a technical standpoint as it's pretty sound overall.
My only complaint here is that you could have delved deeper into the subject.
Time to explore the road less traveled, the hope less gaveled
The cost of hopeless prattle is to know less than you...know.
It's puzzling and amazing how we struggle in the same thing
Become accustomed to praising then run through the same ring
Back where we started... Just another subtle play thing
MMLP - You really dived into the matter here, props.
It felt like a solid introspective reflection upon your existance, as inner vs
outer experience and what is actually real.
Intertwining both psychology and spirituality in the mix.
Perhaps the most important thing to reflect upon for us mere humans and
you delivered some cleverly worded insights. The technical stuff is all good
as well as far as Im concerned. No particular quotes as the whole thing read like
a continous stream of thoughts and you maintanied it a high level.
Both writers did their thing but MMLP gets the vote for taking the whole concept further.
Cool battle.
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