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Old 04-08-2013, 01:44 PM   #3
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Idk why this is being slept on. Maybe the length I suppose but it really shouldn't be. You're one of my favorite writers on here and you didn't disappoint here. You have a style that's all your own and I've never seen anyone even come close to it. Seriously.
But in regards to this piece holy fuck man. CONSTANT alliteration of A's and B's which made for a really crazy read. Usually when people attempt ideas like this, including if I was to try it, I'd end up fucking up and going off topic for rhymes sakes but you did nothing like this. This was an epic my friend and I thoroughly enjoyed this. Props once again.

airborne bio attack - bacillus anthrax,
but alas biological agents became amassed,
bitches attached breathing apparatus after being assaulted and bashed.
before a beast a basilisk, always breathing acidous
^^^Too dope.
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