[Flow]

content wise witty got this, his experience (or at least the fact he is more active in this arena) shines through in that regard, he cleverly builds up, paces his peice and paints the imagery. however blue had the more complex rhyme scheme and structure which really paid off an left a lasting impression. you could argue both equally represent the topic well enough, so it really comes down to content vs flow. id have to vote for flow wouldnt i?

vote blue but props to both