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Old 10-23-2013, 08:04 PM   #12
Frank
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political mastermind, mostly moderate views
i stand to make corrections with a competent few
to flash like orange alerts on metropolitan news
apostles, aloof
plague-resistant, conquering flu
common cold coughing mucus into concepts to puke
from Wisconsin to Utah, 600 block to the Dunes

apartments are an alternate roost
Watched them crash into tunnels that were carpal, and bruise


this was a dope collaboration that didn't disappoint... two writers with 2 different styles exhibiting the same style and you could see still the distinction in differences. black is more passive and introverted with his reflections while adolf is more active extroverted in his phrasing. the same rhyme scheme through out. well done.

i loved that rhyme scheme............
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