diablo:
really beautiful vocab used, the structure was nice to but it was your amazing vocab in this tale that brought it to life.. i really dug it you depicted turmoil in a family through one character from a photograph in need very well.. all the problems that bleed into them nice drop..
innovator:
very poetic, there was this whole strain of lines all tied to a delicate poetic tongue of a writers voice that really came across.. storywise the picture perfect aspect was dope it def was not drawn out and infact thrown as punchline perfectly.. all in all dope piece..
vote = diablo
close match but he just had a lil more prettier vocabulary.. g/l guys
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