Nice drop here. Felt like an emotion driven drop. Flow felt choppy to me but that could be due to the laid out structure of the verse. I like the opening bars.
an emotional stasis. penstroke of oasis, where only we made it
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Also that came across smooth. Overall, I mainly have an issue of ths flow of the verse. Definitely like the message and the you stayed with the content well.
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