Certain
Verse felt written in about 5 sittings over a few boxes of parliaments. The verse had spurts and the verse had drag. That complex contrast got on my nerves a little bit. Now I'm sure you're just swamped and that you haven't fell off the wagon. Looking foward to a 40 liner reminiscent of your RSTL days. These verses just aint clicking. In fact you have not dropped a significant verse yet imo. And honestly I'm really looking forward to it.
Vulgar
Gotta glimpse of classic Vulgar. You went back to the drawing board and it was a hit. You went back to your rabbi curls for this one. I liked this one line a lot
Quote:
Don't be needlessly embarrassed, since an outstretched psalm
can go out on a grotesque limb & reach toward the cloud drenched fog
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Don't wanna beat a dead horse
V/ Vulgar