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Old 06-13-2013, 12:24 PM   #5
Flow
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This had a dope and fresh concept that I don't believe ive seen before.

Loved the whole content of this drop, certainly kept me engaged with some very witty dialogue throughout.

I loved this line below simply for it being one of the lines with internals.
"Well if you’re the source of truth, why do you keep me guessin?"
Because it isn’t learned until discerned by the source of the question.

I think some more internals would have been nice but to be honest it would have been difficult without sacrificing the content, which when done well like it was here is a lot more impressive. Its quite fresh to be honest to see a piece not so heavily focused on the flow. It paid off well.

Some really philosophical points that you made as well which was interesting in itself...

Im pretty tired so I rambled on with out much constructive feedback so apologies for that...

By the way this close was fire..
"So discernment is the truth?" Discernment is the key.
"And with the key, I’ll see the truth?" You'll perceive the tree.
"And what's the tree reveal?" Truth... in all you see & do.
As the creative root branches through all you’ve created too.
"Why didn’t you just say so?" It’s the cost of being free.
Those who don’t find it on their own, find it harder to believe.

Really liked how it tied it all off, flowed perfectly.

Final point- loved some of the vocab in there props.

I will try and give this the feedback it deserves when the baby lets me have some sleep :/
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