Classick, i liked the concepts of your first 2 lines but the wording made em fall short. I did like the second couplet ' grade retention' concept could of been good. Setups could use smoothing too.
Des - the swollen line, joint was cool, missclassify cool wp but so so flip.
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Last edited by Saint; 01-31-2018 at 10:59 PM.
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