[NYCSPITZ]

This was a cool lil piece but sumtimes felt like u were rhyming for the sake of rhyming instead of writing a dope storey and editing rhymes in later. I think sometimes the rhymes come out dope from the beginning. Shouldn't always be the main focus tho. I myself am constantly guilty of this when keying or rushing. Some cool parts tho, nice lil twins twist at the end. Just as a dude writing from a chick perspective, kind of was cringe at times lol. People have done it before but they might've been homo. Anyways cool no show verse buddy glty next round