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Originally Posted by Barcotic
For Battling aka faggot making half naked vids of himself eating ribs
im a godsend, aka guy to call when friends need
id give the shirt off my back for da fam
...meanwhile U do it for an all-men's text league
^^^ Dead. Nasty way to kick things off (literally and as in the bar is good)
ur attitude? legit. s' not why i laugh at u n shit
when it comes to FB,I wanna full investigation on wtf happened to his lip
^^^ haha not bad
sign out, u faggot. w/o a doubt id say ur run sucked
i make mfs retire, but didnt kno they use ur mouth to hang their gloves up
^^^ Sheeeeesh that hurt
'tween me n U, my steez is killin yours. dude, the ppl feel it more
no one likes u. the next time u light up a room, u'll be a spirit orb
^^^ Dope
im comin yo, runnin slow w/ a pump at close range
theyll find shells all around u & brains on ur stomach, no Krang
^^^ This was fire.
i got a name for every piece that's bordering ur house, For ..
n when Eddie the Eagle hits u, it'll do more than ring ya Belfour
^^^ Fire
ayyy get the fuck out my way when im usin ratchets
ur a circus clown; put that round nose to ur face & ur doin backflips
^^^ This was cool. I think it just seems weaker because it followed like 4 fire bars in a row
ur a batshit retarded lame and u act silly slow
I got the Juice. unfortunately urs is still on ur face from ur last video
^^^ jaojfidosjfiaofjad dead
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Overall - Holy shit this verse was mean. I damn near had to log off and send a get well soon card out. Couple things could have been better but like I said I think they were still good just graded on a curved scale because everything else was so fire.
Quote:
Originally Posted by For Battling
Barcotic aka Mike
U claim ur tough... always hungry, str8 devouring ur peers
yet you blow up for simply getting rubbed the wrong way.. that’s cauliflower ear
^^^ Fire
Blow ur brains out ya mouth. Don’t believe me I’ll grab the K then I’m out
either meet me at the border w/ hands, or I’ll Air Canada all the way to ur house
^^^ This was dope
And I ain’t wit that drama shit. Get shmacked if u try n start an argument
Its either I point at em like he started it, or bang toys like retarded kids
^^^ Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiire
Tell em stop hiding, I’ll catch him on his walk to work with the tec
at the end of the block.. soon as u see foreshadow u’ll know its death that comes next
^^^ Dope
Ur clique ain’t scarin’ shit. I’m sendin murder letters to these frail fucks
First I’ll pull up to ur house.. then I open up from the side like mail trucks
^^^ Wording felt a little off, still cool.
I’m on ur campus creepin. Soon as I catch u you’re a goner
One hand aimin’ w/ the stick.. ya whole crew gettin bullied by a Draco - that’s Harry Potter
^^^ Same as above. I don't mind the "that's _____" bars tbh but it is definitely the lazy way to finish a bar. I do it too, but you've already had one of these so I felt this one needed to have those execution details ironed out. Real dope punch but lost some luster for that.
My gang wreckless, we’ll let u talk shit until it really offends us
Then I’ll be on the bike, making noise w/ the cans behind me like Dennis the Menace
^^^ Dead @ the image of you doing a drive-by on a huffy. Nice bar
My goons stay bustin’, ur crews’ nerds that throw painless swings
just give it up Mike, or I’ll let 11 travel thru your mind like Stranger Things
^^^ Punch was dope but the set-up needed re-worked. "painless swings" seemed way forced.
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Overall - A couple very minor critiques but overall this verse was dope. That retarded kids line made me do the screw face.
As I predicted this is super close and could potentially wind up being battle of the week. Because they both had some huge hits I have to go by the things I "didn't like". Barc had less slipups imo, even the bar I wasn't a huge fan of was still a solid hit where as a couple lazy finishes and one forced setup made FB play catchup.
I have to edge it to Barc for consistency.