I truly feel like DMS would've won this with different wording, but the 'bitch I locked you in a tanning bed' ruined it ... even "like I locked you" could've worked as at that point it's a simile
Viper the concept is cool but the execution I'm not a fan off... bang of your hipe implies your shooting him in the hip & it's not very effective as an attack line imo... the idea was fresh tho
Overall I've got viper here
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I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback
Uve won"
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