Ydk usually always gracing us with immaculate flow and a seemingly flawless read, this piece was no exception. the only thing I disliked was how bland your approach was and how you relied on that stanza throughout. Sure you changed a word each time but still felt repetitive. Adonis I felt had no inspiration whatsoever, came with a 'freewrite' for a lack of better words. I could be wrong though. Flow was horrid. Voting ydk for a more complete read and more sound overall.
Vote. Ydk
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