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Old 07-19-2019, 10:47 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
you should worry more about getting laid & less about blastin’ hollows..
the Big Gap between your sexual partners got Bangz smilin’ like a fashion model

Decent current event shit

stab you repeatedly til blood’s spurting on your shoulders & knees..
dump the body & watch you ‘Leak in a Ditch’ like you Pulled Over to Pee

Felt like when Body was using his formula. But juat like Body, it works.

hack your midsection clear off, leave it on the ground w/ mad precision..
cut your head off too...my blade’ll make it ‘Go with your Gut’ like a Snap Decision

Seems like u had to create the scenario a little too much, still creative

i’ma beast w/ the toys. seek & destroy so don’t think ya might prosper..
they’ll RingFire & leave more Body Parts Scattered then Symbols for the White Walkers

A bit late here and the setup could have been used more effectively.

got glocks paired w/ goons to smoke you..
two shots - they’ll put a ‘Couple in the Air’ like Hot Air Balloon Proposals

The whole in the air thing is a bit played, seems too easy but i like the concept. Also this doesn't rhyme for me.
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Originally Posted by Sharp View Post
Ryno's verse

Try that long bar shit w/ me & you’ll be dead on arrival.
Every line was flat w/ no peaks. Now I’m about to do the same to ur vitals.

Seen it done, but the connections saved it.

Got ya fam cryin. U and ya mans dyin. Ur throats getting slit.
I’ll take his head off clean. Next step? Order a bundle for ya funeral bitch.

A bundle of what? I am missing something.

Ya hearts racing now ain’t it? Dawg, just wait until I ether ur features.
Mac 11 or AED? Don’t matter. There’s gonna be a flatline if I’m reaching for either.

It kinda misses because how you gonna kill him with a defibrillator? And the flatline shit was used earlier. Not as bare as the last bar but not too solid

Gat to ya children. Try me & I'm spilling all their DNA, clown.
If he wants Maury can get his kids face blown tf up right in front of the crowd.

I like this one.

No need for convo. I’ll send my gorillas to Canada. Clap this geek.
If this native says a word to my animals he’s getting stretched out. Apache Chief

This shit fire, setup could have been better but the concept is solid.
Gotta say, Ryno's closer makes this really close.

Usually i give it to creativeness but both verses had it. I think the one bundle miss from Ryno is the difference maker, and makes me lean slightly

Blue

I feel like the mountain you need to get over is Blue, @Ryno . I have read more Blue/Ry battlres than any others because for a couple months there yall were battling everywhere. And I'm a fan of both of your styles. Blue is such an easy read and i think that is the difference on a large scale. The consistency is nearly unmatched
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