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Old 12-01-2014, 09:52 AM   #13
Glossy Finish Dick Lips
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Gin&Juice got this dude tricking on hoes w/ out a peep,
U'll see sluts 'blowin En dough' like Snoop Dogg rollin dwn the street.

concept there but the execution sucks. I think you could have executed this a tad bit harsher, something like; If any sluts blowin en dough, she looks like snoop dogg or something to that effect. Has more of an insult'ish impact.

U beg for pussy & get denied, I fuck hoes for fun,
&Ur Going thru a Dry spell that'll take more than Witch Rituals to overcome.

same as above.

Ur a pain to me & ur Mom.. Just stop, dawg please,
When Im around Lypse tick'n us off, Due to her smudging hers on me.

yea, this was a stretch. creative attempt but stretched to say the least.

I heard this fag swallows semen biscuits til he hurls, guys;
He's been draining pricks enough to replace Syringes worldwide.

again, you could have gotten harsher and used more of a relevant tie in on the concept.

Music? If I drop a EP I'll get calls to sit with Execs.,
If you drop something & get rings its only due to a ripple effect.

this was ok, I suppose.

conceptually your dope, NOQ but your executions lack. I think if you were to put more thought in to your executions and make them as harsh as possible, you'd be better off, my dude. decent drop, I'd say one of your weaker ones compare to your other verses i've peeped from you.

v/The HOE show'r. Lol
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