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Originally Posted by Eviction
You’re always the last in competitions until I close your casket.
As far as value? I’m mint condition and you’re open plastic.
setup is pure irony. punch is cool to me. nice comparison bar.
Blue light, the way I’m cooking him, it’s like I see him as fresh meat.
Cuz after I spend the night w/ his girl he’ll have to use one of those on the bed sheet.
its definitely a black light. i can kinda give u credit for the light itself being bluish black, but this is still a stretch
He keeps acting hard, but he’s softer than cloth you can sew in a fabric.
Because blue constantly stinks up the place like mold in the attic.
punch is ok, well worded. concept is very light. you stink like mold?
We ain’t in the same pedigree, you beating me would be a true shocker.
Fuck evictions I barricade doors, that’s a fucking blue, blocker.
nah on this
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Quotes: opener
Close: blue light, mold
Being a little generous but I like the development I see in your verse. Not the greatest concepts but your writing has gotten better.
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
still livin’ w/ mom & dad because of “debt repayment”
on NC you’re a Low Level Boarder. in real life you rent the basement
haha. nice comp bar
Dia wasn’t a dumb enough name to come out of ya mouth?!
cool alias tho, perfect for when they finally kick you outta the house
initially hit light to me, but you did a good job setting up the parents angle in the opener. enough of a twist to make this work
too embarrassed to have ppl over for some chow & grub
when it comes to feeding frenzy’s never able to stop eating around his chums
see the wp, but ill pass on this
nothin’ but a slimy swamp guy with a tiny cock size
ex let him down gently but it takes the whole staff everytime he rock climbs
not feeling this one either
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Quotes: opener, kick you out
You let off the gas in the second half but your opener was strong enough.
Vote: Blue Bayou Closer than I would have expected but in a 4 bar battle any misses hurt a lot. Blue has strong fundamentals and opened with a really well written bar. He didn't do a lot after that, but all of Evictions hits were light. Battle really boils down to opener vs opener and Blue's was better.