Loved the read. Very well crafted piece you got here. The flow throughout is smooth and the story itself isn't exactly dope but you managed to make it dope by writing in an interesting way that keeps the reader to the very end. Props.
The way you write about his feelings and the state that he's in is dope as fuck. Loved this part of the piece because of that;
As the words leak from the pen, he's weeping again
No sleep in a week, he's much weaker than planned
His heart beats for release, while he seeks to pretend
The beast he unleashed gives him peace as a friend
Though he knows it deceives, he still won't believe that it can
Pollute his soul...it can't be evil....it can't.
^ This is top notch shit. ^^
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