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Old 04-30-2016, 09:02 AM   #16
Blam Newton
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with women ur just Aladdin trouble like a scene with jafar
If a bitch ever say "I'd hit that" she means with her car
This is very old. Very, very old.
we can't wait for ur shit to be hidden, that's rightfully chutzpah
the only Arch I've been a part of, was the uppercut that shattered your glass jaw
I dont get it.
as a matter a fact brah, u shouldn't be here and it's truly blatant
his work's so scorned that a lifelong Banana deletion would suit this fruity faggot
I dont get thios either.
ur verses' are so horrid it should be criminal to look at em
if Addenda career, it's because @Detective Mike Hunt, NCPD threw the book at him
This was decent but not really hard hitting. The wordplay doesnt work both ways honestly.
as a parent I heard you're really shittin' the bed
those kids better get fedora cap is the answer when I place a hit on ya head
This was cool but again, the wordplay doesn't both ways.

I got quick hands my fist lands with impact so kid don't irk me
Or I'll break habit so fast they'll think I quit cold turkey
Got advice to rid of the parenthesis on my punches, pointing out the obvious
I'd give you the same feedback but nothing you spit is worth quoting to start with
Cross my path and I'll blast as fast as your ass blinks
And the coroner will be covering Tat up like an episode of Bad Ink
Barrel at his chin, watch me tear his soul from him
I'm the dude that just went toe to toe with Nik, while you're recognized as Aero's only win
Listen up, you ain't getting no bitches you faggot
Even crack whores gotta be high as shit to pick up a habit

This whole verse was pretty much fire. That feedback line was a really hard hitting personal and the Bad Ink line was a really dope nameplay.

Adverse was consistent here and more polished. Vote- Adverse.
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