not voting due to the politics of it all but i really appreciated the reads guys an kudos on a good showing in the finals. hope you guys get some more votes/feedback.
stand outs
witty loved all the parts in italic, how it sped up an really added a sense of pace an purpose - although the last one juttered at the end for me at the abundance of ammo line. threw the flow off a bit for me.
baron
being a total cheeky twat
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Jay Welsh took your lunch money
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Flow....that punch was disgusting. Mvgt Flow
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