Darth,
Well-written. Beautiful piece.
some of us poets. annoyingly unbeknownst to the ballad of colors exposed
if guns become roses, gentle words are gunpowder stemming this cultures explosion -
^ Well done.
Sadly,
As much as I enjoyed your piece, it went up again one of the most enjoyable reads I have had in a while.
Soul,
Almost perfect. Quote? I would quote the whole thing. Beautiful structure, incredible imagery, perfect transitions, well-developed concepts that kept the overall continuity of the effort.
This wasn't what yoda didn't do... It was just Soul probably would have beat anyone, in my eyes anyways.
v/Soul.
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