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Old 06-03-2020, 03:59 AM   #11
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I like how you kind of have this gangster rap vibe to you but you use more elaborate language, and also have some spots of witty metaphor here and there as well. While the flow reads like typical thug shit to you have some spots that shine on their own. Good stuff Exis
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