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Old 09-27-2017, 04:26 PM   #2
Pinot Grij
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This is a great concept. At the start, it seemed like maybe there wasn't enough meat on the bone for this beef -- but in the middle it heated up with some hilarious lines.

final cut/scissors... glory hole... laserdisc plagiarist... broken record player...

Cool concept. Text is not dead! Thanks fellas.
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