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Old 11-18-2018, 10:40 PM   #12
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U need Drugs if u think ur not bottom-tier, the field ur in is nothin but slow kids
Cuz if we're talking about DARE Class, it's filled w/ nothing but pre-teens who don't know shit

This was cool & kinda funny. No complaints

U aint making it out the first round, Ima off this lame bastard
The only time we'll say 'Dare lived' is by spelling the 2nd half of his name backwards

Nah, I adamantly oppose these name reversal or anagram type lines 100% of the time

Mathew Murdock a gangsta? Nah... Hoes are lost like who's he?
Only shortys claiming that 'Double M G' are some Maybach Music & Ross groupies

This was a cool concept, just didn't really have much of a sting to it

U aint DC Standard so sit down, don't play - ya words are fraud n' so gay
This Marv'll come w/ more forced shit than an orc-ward & gauntlet wordplay

Not digging this

Ur suit is the whackest of them all, even ur tailor had trouble w/ seams on the vest
Cuz fat sluts doing cosplay is the only time ur w/ a bitch w/ Double D's on her Chest

Nah, the whole double D type wordplay is just overdone in general. You definitely could've done something more creative than that.

vs

frankly u scared, whole family dyin’ left u sad with despair
now ur forced to live w/ this loss even longer than u had been with theirs

Not feeling it tbh

mob blasted ‘em square infront of u, left the bodies ‘n then bounced
..the Costa agents served up three flat whites that left u frothin’ at the mouth..

you doing coffee bars idk seems weird to me

i got sonic superpowers, u’ve just a gun so big SMACK rappers be cursin’ crazy
the renegades M16 overshadowed his whole career wayyy worse than Jay-Zs

yeah this was dope

first you Navy Seal then agent S.H.I.E.L.D? still gettin’ beat to a pulp
ur logos seen the result.. two black eyes & only 3 remaining teeth in ur skull

this was cool

miss me w/ ur bullshit, talkin’ grimey like ur lord almighty
..they said u’d been an ex-marine but Im the one leavin’ the Corps behind me..

solid closer



punisher started strong and got gradually worse, daredevil started kinda weak and got more consistent. One big difference maker is that daredevil seems to have a better handle on picking the right wording that puts a sting on it, so even when his concepts aren't really hitting, they're still somewhat effective. But if there was any question to which way I was voting, the M16 line was the deciding factor

Vote - Dare Devil
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