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Pharaohs Army · 08-20-2018, 05:26 PM

I don't mind this paragraph format.

It's an interesting read, I guess. I don't really know what you were talking about referencing aliens 3X. I guess that's for people to figure out.

The ending sounded kind of emo.

Some subtle rhymes in here. More than I thought upon second examination...And commas for tempo.

You could do another1 like this I suppose. As a changeup from the norm.

08-20-2018, 05:26 PM	#4
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	I don't mind this paragraph format. It's an interesting read, I guess. I don't really know what you were talking about referencing aliens 3X. I guess that's for people to figure out. The ending sounded kind of emo. Some subtle rhymes in here. More than I thought upon second examination...And commas for tempo. You could do another1 like this I suppose. As a changeup from the norm. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 08-20-2018 at 05:30 PM.