OK well this is tied !
no clear winner ,,, people pick favorites on this board for many reasons ...
so i vote DRAW on this ... theres nothing i find any these writers outmatched
soule use of the WORD ''BOY'' at times felt constant but it maintained tension
great writing ...Diablo exposed the underlying psy op racist agenda of willy wonka
those damned white devils conspiracy writtens are fun and the personals kept me interested as a reader,,, using the picture posted to your advantage smart move
At first i thought Diablo had zero chance of matching Soule's verse...and
then he did... soule takes imagery cadence and originality
diablo takes lyricsism metaphor and depth
great verses from both writers
I prefered soule story in terms how it reads like a emotional horror movie...
where diablo had a bit more depth and layering in terms of statement
and did a great job of finding a lost scene from the umpaloompa movie..
its a tough one im staying out of this....DRAW ya guns.....
Last edited by brokenhal0; 02-18-2023 at 09:05 AM.
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