His feed was on point here and there. A bit harsh but on point. Thought the concept was cool, enjoyed what you were trying to do but certain things Ghost1 said definitely detracted from the piece. A little bit of research and making sure shit makes sense all the way through would have made this a solid well thought out piece tho, instead it stands as a cool enough piece that needs some more work to reach the dopeness scale.
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