Reads like a train-of-thought type of work. You touch on many subjects ranging from Jesus to movies to 9/11.
Began and ended with "where is my soul". Still don't really know what it's about but you packed a lot of rhymes in here. So many rhymes that I noticed when there wasn't a rhyme
"Djangos built the world. Including the Sphinx in ancient Kemet".
Riveting. Rivers. Amazon, Mississippi, the Yucatan Peninsula.
But then shortly thereafter you have Inuits and into it
It's a cool read I suppose. Though I guess if I had to choose I would pick a rhymey topical of yours over this type of thing
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