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Old 07-08-2020, 02:08 PM   #13
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Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness
^ thought this was a cool concept that could have been executed just a tad better

You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence
^ I'm a fan. Good

7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo
^ nice scheme here and good enough punch

I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle
^ this was funny but not super hard lol

Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball
^ nice here

Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting
^ flames imo

Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash
^ liked the concept again but think you missed the mark

Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth
^ HAHAHA cool here

This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin
^ yeah this was alright

You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther
^ I liked this but would prefer something more hard body as a closer

Letter

My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood
^ wordplay cool but conceptually wasn't a great way to start off

You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof
^ damn alright good bar

Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen
^ ehh could have used some better execution but was okay

Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs
^ this seems so bland tbh

.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying
^ alright this was cool

I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him
^ feel like this had been done a million times

Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable
^ this was cool

Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth
^ I mean yeah that's cool

U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia
^ DECENT ENOUGH

Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body
^ dope closer I liked it a lot

All in all this was everything it was billed up to be a dope semi finals match from two great battlers, feel like you both had some misses but Neigh kept more.consistent throughout so I'd lean towards him here. Dope battle

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