Appreciate the in depth feedback @
Ullr good stuff! The "looking up to THE impress" was a typo n completely slipped my mind. I was obvs more concentrated on making the ending lines more impactful I guess! Be a dick move to change it now! Also S/O bcuz @
Diablo text me saying nobody would get it haha!
So this means I'm only voting on one battle? Might have to break my rule, for the sake of the comp!