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Old 10-21-2017, 03:52 AM   #41
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Appreciate the in depth feedback @Ullr good stuff! The "looking up to THE impress" was a typo n completely slipped my mind. I was obvs more concentrated on making the ending lines more impactful I guess! Be a dick move to change it now! Also S/O bcuz @Diablo text me saying nobody would get it haha!

So this means I'm only voting on one battle? Might have to break my rule, for the sake of the comp!
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