[Rawn MD]

Black,

I always enjoy reading ur stuff...

but this was real dope man...

real clean, flow wise and thought transitions.

the brevity of what ur saying, and how u say it...its a true credit to u as a writer.

'she was a lover of many, friend and daughter of few
rosebud modeling moves, cheekbones blossoming blooms
breathing white november winds. dark skin softer than june
i'm a junky in a suit. space-age saucer recluse
nose-deep in ketamine and metropolitan news
aggressive conquerer. benign tumor, pre-operative room
postdoctorate, your honor with tautological blues
modus operandi, let the drama resume
i've got nothing left to lose. only coffins to use' - was probably the highpoint for me...with the contrasts, juxtapositions, thought leads and transitions...just a real nice excerpt imo

i also liked the room filthy/whisky neat line too...

but yeah man..def a good read, and deserves more feed.

stay at it.