snoop's first 3 were all solid, the personal angles were cool too but fell flatter than the rest. mo ease is a really dope current event play, maybe more could have been done w the setup but the punch was lotb.
Inc i like the creativity but i think they fall flat for different reasons. the ancestor shit could have been worded more aggressively, make it an attack as opposed to a statement. the coma shit just didnt connect seamlessly. maybe imagine you're rapping it out loud more, it just doesnt feel aggressive enough for my taste. i like the direction you have taken tho
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