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Old 02-03-2014, 02:05 PM   #5
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Spit fire from the tip of my tongue, that's a flamethrower
Bang on em from 3 blocks away when I'm drivin, that's a Range Rover
leave him assed out in the middle of nowhere, that's a Hangover
^Don't do this....this was the worst part, the way you wrote it just seemed super played.

This was cool tho, I liked it for the most part and you're talented at rhyming, not much to say other than that, I enjoyed the read other than the lines I quoted, I think you're better than that, I'd like to see more.
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