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Old 03-30-2014, 08:53 PM   #3
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This is sick Geno...schemes & multies are fire, content wise it's nice as all shit.Flow is butter imo and I also thought the length was good...not too long, not too short although I was left wantin' more as I dug it so much.

inferno of rage, flames, internal decay, thanks
caused by the conviction of every word that you say, great
vertical range, eyes turn into space, insecurities, weight
social anxiety, the wall between your personal space
assertively fake, awake, thinking its absurd to be lame
whats the purpose of faith, do you deserve to be saved

^^Tightness.

the balance of all things that you know to exist, a total eclipse
open the pit, fall asleep and wake up where nobody is
no one exists, not you, me, him, her, or the coma your in
the aroma is rich, enough to sell your soul for a hit
but the coldness is thick, and your clothes have been stripped
the belt you wore doesn't bare the type of gold that it did
frozen and stiff, eyes wide open like your focussed as shit

^^Good stuff.

Thought it was dope as a whole but those sections I quoted stood out most to me, probably my favourite verse of yours...that I've read and/or fed that is.

Stay upwards bro.
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