[Phalanx]

My, my gentlemen. This was quite the piece of work here. Alot of people do not understand how much skill it requires to carry one multi through a verse. And then to make two verses that hold a semblence of direction? Thats talent. The flow, as I interpreted it, was very smooth from both writers. The first verse slightly more so than the first. As far as lyricism, I liked the first verse a little more. Just more suited to my preference as far as style. But the second verse did a great job following up, and I really think you did a good job tying this piece together with your final line. On a whole, the chemistry here was nice. Great job guys.

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