the first four lines from the first verse were slick
I thought everything else was decent, didnt like the closer
it felt like a stretch for me even though it just happened.
the second verse was pretty slick, I fuck with the Uber line
hash tag line could have been utilized better imo.
didnt really enjoy that closer either..the cane line was smooth.
the 2nd verse had a smoother flow for me...
the first verse could have taken this but I feel the 2nd delivered some memorable lines
although I fucks with that flintstone line...good play on that
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