[Witty]

Hey one of these days you are going to let me pick your brain, I would like to know how your writing process goes.

Ok?

Ok. This was dope, a little toned down from what I usually expect, but it worked, you seemed to keep it more simple than most pieces you write, but it didn't bring down the quality, which was there by the bucketful. The words you use are incredible, and they MAKE SENSE, which is what I think some people don't get...no point using these big impressive words if you are only using them because they are big and impressive lol you fit them in to the piece in a way that makes it so any other word just wouldn't have been sufficient. The last line was my favourite because I was wondering when the weather vane was going to make an appearance, leaving it until the last line really summed things up well and rounded the piece off perfectly. You're good at judging the length a piece should be, and you judged this perfectly again. Good job.