Netcees - View Single Post - Round 2: 7. Diode vs. 2. oats \\ oats wins 10-(-4)

trap · 09-07-2014, 02:29 PM

Both vivid verses, both followed a progressive timeline, both sharp with imagery. The only difference I really see is the progression of the lines. Oats' was more natural and chose a slant to the topic that was easier to work with, while Diodes felt more limiting, which while it created a really well thought out depiction, you could almost only write it in one way. Battle of the round, part two, goes to Oats in my eyes.

09-07-2014, 02:29 PM	#9
trap Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: KCMO. Posts: 377 Rep Power: 14025263	Both vivid verses, both followed a progressive timeline, both sharp with imagery. The only difference I really see is the progression of the lines. Oats' was more natural and chose a slant to the topic that was easier to work with, while Diodes felt more limiting, which while it created a really well thought out depiction, you could almost only write it in one way. Battle of the round, part two, goes to Oats in my eyes. __________________ triplet syllables for minimal criminals.