You should be a bubblegum rapper but if you think ya flowin
I’ll use a Bazooka Joe & open up this wrapper till the pink is showin
this is fire tbh
This is an all-out war so bullets will clip your shin...head...spine
& when ya look over at AMC the last thing you’ll see is The Thin Red Line
wasnt really feelin this
I could win dead lyin...instead I got a gurney for your sad journey
This week I’ll murder you & the nigga that dropped you in the tag tourney
decent, kind of indirect
If the K-Ci you, it’ll split you in two so...JoJo don't roll up slow to me
Or I’ma body a singin nigga...guns will tune him up too fast for Jodeci
this is wordy and I’ve used this on him many moons ago but either way this is good bro, I liked it
I’ma stage this...let Boston Celtics but I’m the King & your the pawn
You ran shit till ya saw my Cavs chase ya down on the block like Lebron
felt like you were trying to incorporate too much, esp in the setup. Decent at best
Your 1-2 & the flyest on the bench but this shit`ll make God pray bro...
If you scramble or Jet...I’ll catch you & spread you all over Broadway Joe
i liked this, good shit
Snarch is gonna be a problem soon, he’s DEFINITELY got the concepts and ideas as well as the fundamentals down, just has to perfect the wording for his specific style and tweak some shit but that’s gonna happen soon. Good shit guy.
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Keep flapping your gums bitch, these knuckles and your face will meet
Set the Barr by whoopin that ass, you'll apologize quicker than a Roseanne Tweet
alright not bad, the concept had potential for more but this was overall still ok
Sugar in your tank you sweet as fuck, that fag shit i dont support
You probably tease and get balls to the face, should replace Draymond Green on the basketball court
alright I liked this
I hope this resorts to voilence, got killing down to a science get to fucking know me
I'll leave you dead toungue hanging to the side of ur cheek looking like the Miley Cyrus Emoji
the concept was good but you fell into bad habit and made this too wordy, decent at best now
Your bitch stuffs hoagies to the face, shes turned on by excessivey eating
A cheat day for her is if a man keeps her hunger satisfied the bitch is actually cheating
nahh
These two fist beating him senseless, fag better run for the fences
After i split his fucking crown he gonna need 20 stitches and routine trips to the dentist
the whole crown play is pretty overdone and played bro
Got The Pound like fucking Benchlifts an easy death wont be that hard
Blood all over your Beshte shells roaring through you like the fucking Lion Guard
whats a bench lift? That a new workout routine that I haven’t heard of yet? This wasn’t good man
Joe you started off really good and if you had kept up that momentum this would have been a fire verse and you would have won it. Your last 3 lines were all misses and hurt your chance at winning this. You have dope concepts as per usual, just gotta continue working on your wording and execution
Vote: Bodysnatxher
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