[Master Rock]

Diablo has a tight flow throughout with plently of flexes. There where a few areas that seemed forced but the narrative was informative from an uninformed reader standpoint. The entertainment level was not as captivating for a story angle but to each there own. Broken on the other hand had a rough start, it felt a tad bit try hard. It didn't truly gather any steam until, " met a tiger shark with a body of a human; she bore a righteous heart.
Her sleek form was adorned with scars from countless battles in the tides of dark.
But it was her eyes, a mosaic of wind chimes and sand dunes; she told me everything will be okay.
I never planned to understand you, an archetype of beauty and bad news,
models with shark bodies popping bottles on the last cruise.
". Broken bodied that whole section...that was a treat. I know Broken attempted a story angle but was scattered too vastly with the flow lacking rhythm and cadence. Tons of ideas but I felt myself wandering off in space like I had ADHD all over again. I initially was going to give it to Halo based off the the epic multiple stand points and story but Diablo had a more direct polished verse that was easy to follow and had a vibe throughout. Vote Diablo