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Old 11-29-2018, 11:53 PM   #27
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Some lines were written with too many syllables. Instead of fixing that by rewriting I will physically cut it out and move words around in the program till it sounds as natural as I can make it.

Another hazard of moving stuff around too much is the timing sounds way off in sections, making it sound like the words are said too soon or too late.

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