[dull boy]

Originally Posted by WRATH

Thanks for peeping

Here's the latest update for anyone who cares.

https://soundcloud.com/mercsinare/mi...-112918-753-pm

If anyone has any mixing tricks or tips I'm all ears.

Your issue, in my opinion, is mostly your voice/vocal tone/lack of energy. You don’t sound comfortable. At about 20 seconds you cut in and every word is rushed.

Can you hear it and aren’t sure what to do about it, or do you not hear what sounds bad about your delivery?